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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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do you hear it? the sound of rushing wind tickling leaves of trees as it makes its way to your doorstep. a whisper on the wing of a dove as she lights upon your window sill... water trickling over polished rocks-- singing, singing, a sound of harps and angel voices, as it gently kisses your toes. do you see it? the prism peeking through a lasting dew drop shining into your hand-- hold it, feel it, let it tattoo itself into your palm. do you feel me? for all these things i wished for you today-- my gift to you, designed by the master craftsman. -dgvarner 5-15-01 "...if i ran away, i'd never have the strength to go very far..." [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
DVG, Very nice gift. Thanks. It brings a bit of calm to a hectic day. I enjoyed this piece. Panne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I sure felt them after reading this, thank you! Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes, yes and YES...a lovely gift indeed...and I am smiling at a bad joke parker once made about my reference to a "hot rushing wind" ROFL...but you KNOW how he is...gotta love him! But I'm sure safe...this is too beautiful for such silliness. Lovely expression!  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PANNE..youre welcome.. thanks for reading!KATHLEEN..glad you enjoyed thanks for stopping in!SERENITY..i can only imagine what kind of joke PARKER made....LOL! we'll see how he butchers this one..  thank you for beautiful hugs, g |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
yes, i can hear it, but not nearly often enough.... loved this.. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I'll try to be nice and not butcher anything... cause this was so sweet and I think I could feel that wind. Send me that wind anytime... no not serenity's hot rushing wind. .... hmm you know how a poet tends to read into a poem for hidden meanings.... I think I'm getting the message now... your sending me a fan to cool my feet from Sears made by master craft... cool.  Parker was here.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful piece, dgvarner! A rainbow in the hand...wow what a fantastic idea! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ So beautifully said. Replete with imagery of such serenity. Florida wears well on you !  Have a GREAT day ... You've placed images of beauty in my thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks JAMIE PARKER...lol...yeah..i knew it was bound to emerge..that little devil in ya...lol but anyway...glad you stopped by all the same..  VAS..thanks poet friend MISS MARGIE..yes..florida has always worn well on me.. glad you enjoyed the read..hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- well, look at you penning happy thoughts..lol. i'm liking this alot...very nice..  sending these little wishes back at ya.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sending those warm thoughts to you too, my friend...may your days be filled with such serenity... |
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