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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-16 02:08 PM

LOVE HAS A SCRIPT,
THAT WE ALL FOLLOW.
SOME THINGS ARE ALLOWED IN LOVE,
OTHER WE CONDEMN.
BUT I,
I WANT TO WRITE MY OWN SCRIPT:
I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU.
I WILL STICK BY YOU.
I WILL BE THERE FOR YOU,
EVEN WHEN YOU'RE LOST.
I WILL NOT SURRENDER,
YOUR LOVE TO THE WORLD.
UNTIL DAWN AWAKES, I WILL WAIT FOR YOU,
THE RULES I WILL BEND.
I WILL DO THAT FOR YOU,
JUST BECAUSE I LOVE YOU IN MY OWN HUMAN WAY.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2001-05-16 02:16 PM

A very sweet pledge to one you love, nicely done.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-16 03:43 PM

yes, love is unrehearsed, good for you....

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-05-19 12:07 PM

Nice concept and beautiful declaration of unconditional love....splendid!~!

Nathan

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-05-19 07:09 PM

Beautifull written Walker, but am I right when I feel a bit sadness or despair in this poem too?

Love it though.

Titia

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-05-19 08:57 PM

no doubt walker. . . pull out that pen and do it the right way!!

this is great. . . the feeling of determination and love is there. . .

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