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Passions Gallery: 1 slick lady (passions waves)

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Sven
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0 posted 05-16-2001 01:58 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.



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1 posted 05-16-2001 02:34 PM       View Profile for jellybeans   Email jellybeans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jellybeans

very very nice.....great presentation  
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Sven, very well expressed. 1slick_lady is a great addition to the Passions Gallery.  

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Decaflame
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3 posted 05-16-2001 03:21 PM       View Profile for Decaflame   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Decaflame

She will enjoy this much, Sven, just as we all will.  You keep adding to that Gallery...we enjoy your efforts so very much!
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4 posted 05-16-2001 03:50 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Helen is a wonderful part of Passions, and a gifted poet...

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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5 posted 05-16-2001 11:18 PM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

Applause!
1slick_lady
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Sven......i am very touched by this.....thank you & thank you for putting me in the passions gallery........i am honored...smooch......helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare

Sven
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7 posted 05-17-2001 09:42 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

jb, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

A2, thank you. . . and she is indeed a great addition. . .  

Decaflame, thank you for reading. . . I will indeed keep adding, as long as you keep enjoying!!

Kathleen, indeed she is. . . I've always enjoyed her writing. . . thank you. . .  

JLR, *bowing* Thank you!!!

helen, the honor is all mine. . . it has been wonderful to read your work from the day you arrived. . . and not just me. . . your work touches many. . . thank you for sharing them with us, and we hope that you'll be with us for a long time. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

anonymous albert ?
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i enjoyed this read greatly...by the way you wrote it was very nice...it gave the poem that feeling no one else can...well maybe more ...but yea...beauitful work once again...sven

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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I am slowly but surely cathing up on these, Sven.   LOL! As once before, I fell behind in reading.   I love the style you use in your work. You are indeed a Beautiful Heart.  
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10 posted 06-01-2004 12:23 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful
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