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the form of femininity

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jellybeans
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0 posted 05-16-2001 11:58 AM       View Profile for jellybeans   Email jellybeans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jellybeans



the form of femininity

I need no head
you care not what I think.
I need no hands or arms
with which
I might reach for an
open door.
I need no feet
that I would  
walk away from you.
I am the perfect form
of femininity
I meet your every need.
© Copyright 2001 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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OUCH !!! great write as always....helen
Decaflame
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2 posted 05-16-2001 12:07 PM       View Profile for Decaflame   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Decaflame

This is an awesome write, and I would like to have the statuette on my mantle, please....
Packratmike
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3 posted 05-16-2001 12:13 PM       View Profile for Packratmike   Email Packratmike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Packratmike

This is too excellent for words.....perfection!

Mike
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4 posted 05-16-2001 01:29 PM       View Profile for jellybeans   Email jellybeans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jellybeans

thanks so much.....it always amazes me, the ones I am unsure of are liked the most...I really found this one lacking, I knew I had a poem in my head to go with the pic, but I wasn't sure this was the right one...thanks again  
Irish Rose
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5 posted 05-16-2001 04:13 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

my goodness, you mean I don't need all these extra limbs!!!!!

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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6 posted 05-16-2001 04:35 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Hey... at least you have something to offer. *G* That's more than I can say...

This poem would be powerful by itself... but the picture adds a searing visual. How cold life is when so much is possible and so little is needed. *S* Well done!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 05-17-2001).]

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Hehe!
Great ...
I have no legs that I would walk away from you...
Love that line, something my exs would agree on:-)!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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8 posted 05-16-2001 06:53 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

the form of femininity is not on the outside. . . I feel that's what you tried to show here. . .

I liked it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

jellybeans
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Irish rose   well they do come in handy sometimes   thank you

suthern...lady...I just got one thing to say to your comment....if *you* got nothing to offer, then I must be in the minus figures, cause I have never seen a heart more loyal or with more love   thank you lady

cuddlez...thank you  

sven...yeppers...you got it right, thank you  
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