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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2001-05-16 11:52 AM



I Hope My Words Abide

Each day of our journey-
Takes us closer to the end...
Each turning of the trail, we face-
New foes, or maybe friends.

Each challenge met, and won or lost-
Defeat, or victory...
Does place another chisel stroke-
On that sculpture known as Me!

Now I’ve been writing poetry-
Since nineteen ninety-eight.
I’ll never sell, that’s just as well.
I scribble on life’s slate.

To leave my mark, a memory-
For those who come behind...
Graffiti down the halls of life...
A glimpse into my mind.

Unimportant? Likely so-
Another nameless bard.
Whom Death pursues relentlessly-
And now He’s pressing hard.

Yet still I’d like someone to know-
He lived, he loved, he died.
So tirelessly I scribble on...
And hope my words abide.

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-16 12:01 PM


quote:
I’ll never sell, that’s just as well.
I scribble on life’s slate.




I know this feeling.  Your words will abide.  They will reside, and carry tides...

I share your values....

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2001-05-16 02:09 PM


Gunslinger-Always nice when you pay a visit, I like your style, Oh, and your poetry too.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-05-16 04:16 PM


No need to hope, Mr. Gun--your words DO abide...and I'm happy to have been able to enjoy your work here! Continue on, and I will keep reading your wonderful stories! Thank you!
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
4 posted 2001-05-16 06:49 PM


Gunslinger:  I'm glad I caught this poem today.  I have been posting elsewhere and don't come here often, but I love your poetry!  I always look for it.  It definitely will abide!

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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5 posted 2001-05-16 09:20 PM


1998, that's the same year I started writing. Funny, I thought you'd been writing most of your life. I think you've expressed the heart of many poets in this piece, John. Well done.
thepoeticplumber
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 185

6 posted 2001-05-16 09:44 PM


Your writing gives a good view of the poet.  I'm glad you started writing when you did.  I started in late 99.  It's a great way to express yourself.  Especially for people like you who have a wonderful way with words.  Roger  


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