Mysteries That Lead To You

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Open Poetry #13

Mysteries That Lead To You

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-16 08:53 AM

Mysteries That Lead To You

what are the things
that keep you up at night
restrict and paralyze
you with fright
what are those dreams
I see on the shelf
that you anguish about
and keep to yourself
tell me something special
you’d like to do
something no one else
has ever done with you
these are the things
I want to know
for they are the things
that go far below
hidden in private
known by a few
they are the mysteries
that lead to you

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Coal Surrender
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since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

1 posted 2001-05-16 09:10 AM

Precious thoughts in sensuous tones, a true lover's song.

Coal

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-05-16 10:17 AM

www.map.com...bring water and don't forget to drop the breadcrumbs.

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

3 posted 2001-05-16 10:47 AM

One of your best!
Very well done!!
Love it!!!

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-16 11:56 AM

I liked the way this flowed to the ending, Helen, nicely done.

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2001-05-16 02:36 PM

mmmmmmmm, love the thoughts in this....great write

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2001-05-17 12:44 PM

Very nice smooth flow slick. Well enjoyed

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