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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Empty Wine glass, etched with hearts meant to toast love empty-gathering dust. Queen size bed, lace edged, satin touched waiting for a prince his side is empty. Heart of love, once so full with hopeful dreams and passions fire empty though oddly, it still beats. all of me empty without him... |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Staggering in lost love, your words so clearly exploit the pain. Very Good! Coal |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Though oddly, it still beats. How surprising it is when we find our hearts beating alone in the emptiness. Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Not much fun to be empty or alone...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey lady! (been awhile, but I'm still hanging around!) Sad, but loved your comparisons...but there's hope--you cannot fill a thing that's full, yes? YES.  HUGS. Hope you are well! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is sad....so sad |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Your writing brings out the sadness of the words and the pain and loneliness. Yes, his side of the queen size bed may be empty, but hopefully you will find someone new and you will feel better. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, The desolation of feeling "empty" leaves our hearts in such turmoil and angst, which you have captured so perfectly and sadly, beautifully in this piece. Love, Elise |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey Sandra...it's good to see you around here again, but not good to see you sad like this...but wonderful expression of these emotions...take care... sp  to be with you... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know this feeling well Sandra, this is well written and well told. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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