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Jon Mewett
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0 posted 2001-05-16 07:24 AM




He quietly turned into the street
He’d been gone….. so long
He wondered if she’d remember him
If she’d recall ……….their song

And every leaping step he took
He’d look up to the skies
His love for her had never dimmed
Pools of tears….... his eyes

The sun beat down upon his back
A blessing from …..above
The thoughts of her now in his mind
Wrapped his head……….. in love

Oh how he loved this freedom song
That swept and held his heart
To see her face and touch her hair
And his love for her ……..impart

The gentle breeze caressed his face
It made him feel …….so good
The day was warm and felt so wild
He’d rewrite the past………if he could

Her room was bright and smelt so sweet
She sat there dumb ……..amazed
Her joyful sobs……… a gentle sound
As on his face ………..she gazed

Her warm embrace though older now
Made him at last ……….feel whole
As he joined in the angelic choir
That sang ……….within his soul


‘I knew you’d come’ she softly said
‘I knew it……… every day’
He’d never been a holy man
But he knew tonight…….. he’d pray
Jon Mewett


[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 05-16-2001).]

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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2001-05-16 09:15 AM


Stay warm............everyone.

See yer

Jon

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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2 posted 2001-05-16 11:09 AM


This was lovely.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-05-16 01:06 PM


A wonderful poem.  I am presuming this is your Mom you came back to see.  And I know how happy she was.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-16 04:04 PM


I didn't fully understand it, but I enjoyed reading it.

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


snowpants
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Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2001-05-16 06:51 PM


'Oh how he loved this freedom song
That swept and held his heart
To see her face and touch her hair
And his love for her ……..impart

The gentle breeze caressed his face
It made him feel …….so good
The day was warm and felt so wild
He’d rewrite the past………if he could'

This is beautiful, Jon...I truly love this one!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

rosepetals25
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6 posted 2001-05-16 10:04 PM


Jon,

   It has been sooo long since I've read something you written. Now I remember why I used to look for your name! You write so beautifully! This is a wonderful poem... so touching! I'm very happy I spotted it and stopped in

TaraB

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
7 posted 2001-05-16 10:07 PM


Nicely done, my friend.

jwesley

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

8 posted 2001-05-17 02:21 AM


Thanx everbody....this place is so friendly.........I don't get to write as much as I should these days........with one thing and another......But I do fly thru sometimes and read as much as I can.......I just had to post something.......thanx again for your warmth......

Jon

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
9 posted 2001-06-01 05:41 AM


Oh this is beautiful Jon.. I'm so glad you still stop in here occassionally.. it would have been a crime to keep this one from us!   Oh, this is truly lovely.. heh, I feel like crying now, this is so happy..  
Love,
Lynne

“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..”

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