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The Water's Trumpet
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The Water's Trumpet |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
The Water's Trumpet We could stop time in the instance of a breath, behind the veil of closed eyes darkness becomes light in the chase of spirit's freedom. There a panoramic view of ageless romance colors the hope for love to once again find its way. Along the banks of the "Congaree" all motion seems to stop, as the steps of yesterday's lovers renew their path in visions I find within. Pausing to wonder, how often words of promise were spoken to rise above the water's trumpet across the rocks... one could only hope to find such ardent longing. Does your hand find its warmth pressed dear to your heart, contemplation of the sight we've just shared. Could the water's rush speak of a new dream... one to be made true. Coal 5/14/01 © |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Coal~ Such serenely sincere thoughts, cascading across the page. 'as the steps of yesterday's lovers renew their path in visions' Most enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: what a lovely line....to match a lovely poem. Well done Coal. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Enjoyed the read, read it twice. Serene, tender. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This read like a warm bath, relaxing in it's thoughtful repose...very beautiful, Coal! |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Marge, Karilea, Virginia, Serenity Thank you, it's my pleasure to share with you. Coal |
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