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Still The Echoes

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Marge Tindal
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Still The Echoes
~*Marge Tindal*~

still the echoes
in the head
  dead long dead
  long long dead

resonate no more
no more no more
I implore
no no  no no more

sashed  slashed
abandoned
dead
  long long dead
  dead long dead
echo echo echo
intheheadheadhead

long dead
wrong dead
still it echoes
in the head

da-da da-da da-da da-da
dead-dead-dead
  echo echo echo
intheheadheadhead

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-15-2001 10:37 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

whoosh....from light...to dark...

the echoes are echoing, softer, softer, almost....

gone

but still the echo,

echoes on........
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2 posted 05-16-2001 01:06 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Okay no more caffeine for you! you you you!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 05-16-2001 05:54 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Hushhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Regards to you Marge,
Sudhir
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Yes, I hear them crashing around in my head, as well.
Interesting form. Well done.
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5 posted 05-16-2001 01:16 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  I hear those echoes too!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 05-16-2001 04:17 PM       View Profile for Mabel A. Dilley   Email Mabel A. Dilley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mabel A. Dilley

exceptionally innovative form. I hear the echos also.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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7 posted 05-16-2001 05:07 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

wow- you created a big impression with just a few words
EXCEPTIONAL!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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I lovelovelove this oneoneneneeee

Titia
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9 posted 05-16-2001 07:53 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

A stir of Echoes, nicely done MArge~...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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10 posted 05-17-2001 11:40 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This reminds me so much of dreams that have no hope and yet will not die... they just keep haunting and whispering and leaving aches of might-have-beens. I'm so accustomed to a different type of poetry from you, I didn't expect to open this one and find my own confusion. *S* But it's a fine reminder that you can write anything well. *S*
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Very creative, Marge, I like!

Corinne
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12 posted 05-17-2001 02:49 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I'm hearing the echoes today Marge, sometimes I wish I could silence the echoes.......this is wonderful.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-17-2001).]

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Marge,

I like this one very much.  I think it's these echoes that makes you the talented writer that you are.  Please don't tell them to hush.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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Marge, with the echos we get to hear your words over and over and over.  Nicely done.  Hugs,  ME
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 05-17-2001 08:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

*I appreciate each of you for your comments on this one.

Sometimes, a painful memory comes back with a Gatling gun staccato that echoes loudly.
This one did ... and found it's way to the page after almost 26 years.

I guess all memories create their own form.

~*Marge*~

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whew!
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