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Now Just A Memory
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Now Just A Memory |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
The morning tide is low as I walk alone along the beach looking for your footsteps now washed away. Time and tide washes everything away leaving me alone and empty yearning for what once was a fullness of waves. I miss you and your unruly hair that dashed across your forehead and tickled my face whenever you came close. Now all there is is the memory of sensation... lingering like a ghost and haunting me as I walk alone upon the beach looking for your footsteps now washed away... From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a lovely write, latin....very nice! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I like this very much. The sadness of the footprints washed away by the waves of time. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is fantastic!!!  |
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Tough_Cookie Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 13USA |
Oh this is so sad and so full of passion. I really like this poem. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
latin passion, Very calming and soothing work of poetry. To imagine in one's heart that the footprints could remain. Oh, how we might walk them over again to rewrite those days of wavy hair.... Sensational writing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes when they are in our arms we can feel every curve and enjoy every sensation...until they are gone and we have only memories and desires to appease us...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I truly liked this LP...very vivid recall. Beautifully portrayed. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
The metaphorical ocean - is deep and full of surprises. If you keep walking that beach, sooner or later love will find you anew. Corinne |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
latin passion, Yes, and this is truly how it feels, the missing, the longing. Great writing here. Thank you for this one. Michael Proust- |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Love it. Titia |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
A wonderful write! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
oh,i love it |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Long overdue comments of appreciation, for that I most humbly appologize for my lateness. Sunshine; Thank you, a rookie am I, but trying. Ino2B; Thank you for your kind comments. Denise; Thank you for the read. SEA; Thank you, I'm honored by your reading. Tough_Cookie; Ahh... now don't make me get another box of tissues. Thank you for the read. Lighthouse Bob; I like the thread you added, thanks for the comments, way to much praise, but I'll accept graciously. JamesMichael; I'm glad for the read and your comments. Serenity; Thank you for the reading. Corinne; Your words are a wonderful thread to my poem. Thank you. Auguste; Thank you,for the thread that you've added. Titia Geertman; Thank you, Packratmike; Kind remarks, I thank you for reading my poem. Watersign6; Glad you like it. A a smiley to boot. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a haunting write...well done |
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