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When Your Tears Falling
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When Your Tears Falling |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When your tears falling down, It Is just tearing up my heart, Just to see you cry, Let us try, Not to say goodbye, Once we leave, And left the things unsaid, Without any words to say, And you wanted It In that way, When your tears are falling down, Like the love whispers calling out upon the seashore, When your tears are falling , My heart cries too, And tries, not to break eachother's heart away, Because It's hurts Inside badly, Sadly, When you know that love all you had It All gone, So It's hurts me, When I seeyour tears falling, Down Like a raindrop on my fingertips, please don't cry, I ask you all Is to be clam, I don't want you to be hurt, Because I love you too much, When you tears are falling..... [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Great piece! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good expression of your emotion and feelings...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
a pure expression of a pure heart, vandana...made me say "awwwww......"  Thank you! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
So true, when we see the one we care for cry--it hurts us but fills our heart with love. -------------- |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Brilliant writing, vandana!! Nathan |
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