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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-05-15 06:58 PM


In answer to Paula Finn's YOUR TITLES IN A POEM
I've tried one too, just to see if I could, hope you don't mind.

Today I will love you
If you could only see
I'm still a lonely man
Am I being heard
Close your eyes
Please stop typing and listen
Sometimes I wish
The sad truth
Sometimes I wish
A world of make-believe
Drops of heaven fall on my head
Life trough rain
Today I will love you


Titia


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1 posted 2001-05-15 07:03 PM


Very good!!    SEA
Irie
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2 posted 2001-05-15 07:03 PM


AWESOME  
Oh, now I have to go try it.
Me thinks we should make this a challenge?!?!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-05-16 01:16 AM


Well done...fun too isnt it?
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-16 11:51 AM


very sincere and real words here

Kathleen

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and the sun drips honey."
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5 posted 2001-05-16 04:10 PM


This was just great Titia!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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Mabel A. Dilley
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6 posted 2001-05-16 04:14 PM


Wow!! I am so impressed with the ease of these words.

"I am not now that which I have been."

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-05-16 04:31 PM


This is very nice.
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8 posted 2001-05-16 07:39 PM


I love it!
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