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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-15 02:13 PM


he's always there
         listening. . .

no matter where
    they hide
              no matter where
                        they run

he's always there
         listening. . .

Cupid has cursed him
    Aphrodite has sent
    Medusa after him
         Destiny has called
         him a thorn
              and Fate has
              wished him deaf

but

he's always there
         listening. . .

listening to them
reveal their answers
the answers to the
questions that we all have

and when he's done
         listening. . .

he comes back

and shares what
he's heard
with us

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-15 02:14 PM


And I think you've captured this poet's abilities quite well...

Kudos!

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2 posted 2001-05-15 02:47 PM


Sven...I second that.  Bob
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-05-15 02:51 PM


Very nice Sven...James
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4 posted 2001-05-15 05:12 PM


yes, and he is such a nice guy too   SEA
Charisma
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5 posted 2001-05-15 05:56 PM


you captured this wonderful poet quit well.

((hugs))
Charisma

Irie
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6 posted 2001-05-15 05:58 PM


Thank You Sven, for introducing me to Interloper.
It's always nice to see anothers view of someone.
You've done a fine job.
I just love this Gallery that you're doing!  

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



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7 posted 2001-05-17 03:20 PM


Ok, Sven, come clean.  Who ratted on me  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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8 posted 2001-05-17 03:49 PM


hmmmmmmm this made me smile   nice write, for a nice poet  
Sven
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9 posted 2001-05-17 09:38 PM


Sunshine, thank you my friend. . .

Bob, thank you as well!  

James, thank you for reading. . .

SEA, yes he is!!  Thank you. . .

Charisma, thank you. . . it's always good to know that I captured them. . .

Irie, glad that I could show him to you. . . and thanks for reading!!  

jb, glad that I could make you smile. . .  

Interloper. . . I can't really remember who ratted you out. .. I know that you have a reputation to uphold. . . LOL. . .    thanks for sharing your words with us. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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10 posted 2001-05-18 01:08 PM


you write and share so much beauty of what you are saying in your poems...another truly awesome poem...thanks for sharing sven...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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11 posted 2001-05-24 04:52 AM


Amazing work as I tread the halls of your gallery alone tonight...The pictures speak with your language, Beautiful Heart.  

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12 posted 2004-06-01 12:24 PM


wonderful write!
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