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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I walked alone, written words at every corner turned, keepsakes, desires. You are, the heart within, simplicity at it's finest. Just a glimpse of you, in passion's tangle brings thoughts of the moonlight and more. I breathe you in, to dream you like that, to dance...forever in your thoughts. Without words, I would be alone in this room, needing you, designing thoughts in a world of make-believe, listening in total quiet to a love now departed. Save me...for I am putty in your hands. I would have loved you anyway, if I could only feel the echoes of you...if only ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Maureen! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
As in "Adagio for Strings, Op.11" (Samuel Barber 1910-81) very haunting and poetic. Your words are very moving and can touch one's soul. "Just a glimpse of you, in passon's tangle brings thoughts of the moonlight and more. I breathe you in, to dream you like that, to dance...forever in your thoughts." Crescendo! From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh yes, superb!!!!  SEA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Denise, LP and SEA..thank you all *s Maureen..the words were there for the taking "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sometimes I wonder what we would do without words. This is lovely |
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