Nightmare walking (Victims)

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Open Poetry #13

Nightmare walking (Victims)

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2001-05-15 10:51 AM

Scream with me
me children do
in the night
i hunted you

In your dreams
my will wins through

i will fly
night goes by
i will see
with forbidden eyes

In my nightmare
you walk too

yet i am not evil
i merely hunger
as do you
I am just a victim to

victims aren't we all

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2001-05-15 10:55 AM

Walter,

Well done. I enjoyed your style and construction.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-15 10:58 AM

Yes we are all victims. You just have a way of presenting it that catches our attention.
I think you'd make a good TV writer for shock commercials.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-05-15 12:50 PM

But Walter...I choose NOT to be a victim any longer...there was a time in my life that yes I was...but no more..no more...this is a frightening look at the attitude that is killing this world today...we are all victims

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