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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-05-15 09:42 AM


I planted a seed in the soil as I wept
And through dark of winter it silently slept
Through blizzard of night and through wind frozen day
In silence and darkness, it patiently lay

What flower could come of a small planted seed?
Whatever it rendered would honor my need
For my life would be blessed with one colorful bloom
And no matter how small, it’s delight I’d consume

I planted a seed in the soil as I wept
After springtimes of rain it’s roots tenderly crept
Beneath ground once laden with thick icy snows
Came the green stalk of pleasure, the stem of a rose

Kissed by the sunshine and blessed by a tear
The roses abound in my garden each year
More glorious than any bloom I’d visions of  
The seed that I planted  -  the sweet seed of love

I planted the seed in my youth as I wept
Through winters of sorrow it silently slept
Now nurtured by heart's spring, my gardens abound
With rich warm affection in love’s sweet surround

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 05-15-2001).]

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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1 posted 2001-05-15 09:49 AM


It is indeed that time of year when we look at miracles that we can, for a moment, hold in our hand, before entrusting it to the good earth....

this is wonderful....

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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2 posted 2001-05-15 09:50 AM


Liz,
This is exquisite and most elegantly beautiful...

Regards,
Sudhir

GrapesRMine
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3 posted 2001-05-15 09:52 AM


What a beautiful, heart felt poem!  I love the pain before joy theme of this; it is a mark of authenticity.


Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-15 10:14 AM


the flow is only outmatched by the expression of love throughout every line....I really enjoyed this, I'm a gardner....

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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5 posted 2001-05-15 10:50 AM


You tickled my green thumb with your wicca of words in this poem, and I loved it!  The rhythm was fantastic.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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6 posted 2001-05-22 12:25 PM


As we sow, so shall we reap. *S* And you've brightened so many days with your loving ways... I'm so glad harvest time is here. *S* Beautiful!
latin passion
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7 posted 2001-05-23 12:56 PM


I loved your poem, the last paragraph tugged at my heart.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

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