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Dark Angel
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Dark Angel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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In my pit of black despair, dark angel comforts me takes my pain and gives me air sets my spirit free I do not know what I give him except my pain and sorrow he comes reveals my solace whim gives me hope for the morrow When the night is long and black and misery is my shroud dark angel comes, with his dark sack that carries rainbows proud I don't know why he comes to me in my darkest despair I only know when I'm not free his presence is felt there his bleeding wings an earthly sign of pain he bears for me he covers me, and I resign from worries; I'm set free but what do I a craven slave give him in return I only offer a life he craves with passion still to burn Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
(((hugs))) to you ... Be well (as you say) Regards, Sudhir |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Kethry, a well written piece. I hope you do not often find yourself in that place... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, Kethry, these dark angels are something else aren't they? Boy, I tell you they can sure put us through the mill.....good to see you here, no one can leave this place, once you get in you can't escape.  Kathleen |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I was taught at a young age, Dark Angels were from HELL. Yet reading this you have put a different perspective on them. I've read your poem twice and you make Dark Angels seem more life giving. Let me know if this is what you meant. I get told quite often here that I don't understand what people are trying to convey. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A very deep write, from a very good heart... well done little one.... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Kethry....this is very well said....sounds like you and he need each other. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, beloved one. you bring me comfort and peace as always. Kathleen, as always you read my heart. INclan, thank you for your comments. Inot2B you are correct. Spot on about the life giving in fact. Decaflame, thank you Elizabeth, Yes I think we are co-dependant. be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting thoughts Kethry...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Your dark angel is something like my Randy dragon. LOL *L* Sy |
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