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Open Poetry #13

I just remain

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-14 07:49 PM

Finally, I look in the mirror
and I see a painful face.
I thought I was happy.
Now I realize that I'm truly not.
The worse is my heart,
it cries in low cries.
I cannot console it,
it's beyond that.
I don't want to write this,
but my pen just writes.
It pours my emotions,
in a single stance.
I don't know what to do,
solutions are hard to choose.
A million pop on my head,
then disappear again.
I bear my soul on these pages,
my feelings I paint on them.
My love, I masquerade between words.
Tears are my ink,
they scribble all that I can't say.
When love makes me mute,
I just remain.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-05-14 08:07 PM

Another one.......and this one is so emotional. I felt every word here, and so will most poets who write with their heart.
(and no, I'm not stalking you...I just love the way you put things into words!!!)

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 05-14-2001).]

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-05-14 08:09 PM

Speechless...and knowing me you understand what that takes!

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