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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Winter is now but a memory shared, your fuzzy branches became a green home- a cradle for wings that soon will be aired. Golden Harvesters for honeydews comb, while Painted Ladies hollyhock adore- how could I not plant them each a biome. These beauties of spring that made the heart soar, seem somehow diminished without you here- the peace they brought isn’t there anymore. I witnessed elegance having no peer, when you chose to grace this soft southern sky- how can I possibly wait for a year to hear your hello instead of goodbye- I miss your soft touch my blue butterfly.  There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I witnessed elegance having no peer...exquisitely written! [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sigh* Jamie, this is beautiful!  SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh my friend, you write so beautifully. Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very sweet write..loved your blue butterfly *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh. I miss you too. This still makes me smile though...somehow...I have images of your garden. And you know that a year in the grand scheme isn't that long right? Thank you dear, this means the world and I will see you again - relatively soon. The key word being relatively! With love, your BB  All obscurity starts with a danger: Your dangers are many. I Cannot look much but your form suffers Some strange injury Sylvia Plath [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beauty shared is beauty doubled. Joyce |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
AW...this is wonderful.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jamie, my friend, this is extremely wonderful... Regards, Sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
JLR-- Thank you very much... SEA-- Thank you my 12-stepping friend... MM-- I am glad you think so dear one. Wynter-- Glad you enjoyed it--thanks Joyce--Many thanks (squared) Sharon-- ~blushing~ gee whiz-- thanks in so many ways you may never know... Sudhir-- Always brings a smile to see your name in my threads friend.. your kind aura always comes through...  K --. .  . . most relatives are a pain...heh HK>LK There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
There are relatives and there are relatives..the latter of which I wish would HURRY UP lol... THIS is beautiful...BIG SMILES...(and hey - think about wings...) thanks for the picture dear. KAll obscurity starts with a danger: Your dangers are many. I Cannot look much but your form suffers Some strange injury Sylvia Plath [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I miss your soft touch my blue butterfly." Enjoyed the feelings expressed within this writing...James |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks James!! There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i liked this poem, james |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
thanks eagle,, and errr-- is your name also James? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
ROTF. Had to come back for another read and I know what to call you to get you irked now don't I. Heh. MR J Patterson (needs an Esquire I think) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
How time flies...or does it? always beautiful writing from you Jamsey dear  MM The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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