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Jamie
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Blue Heaven


0 posted 05-14-2001 05:28 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Winter is now but a memory shared,
your fuzzy branches became a green home-
a cradle for wings that soon will be aired.

Golden Harvesters for honeydews comb,
while Painted Ladies hollyhock adore-
how could I not plant them each a biome.

These beauties of spring that made the heart soar,
seem somehow diminished without you here-
the peace they brought isnít there anymore.

I witnessed elegance having no peer,
when you chose to grace this soft southern sky-
how can I possibly wait for a year

to hear your hello instead of goodbye-
I miss your soft touch my blue butterfly.

                      

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

© Copyright 2001 Jamie Patterson - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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1 posted 05-14-2001 05:41 PM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

I witnessed elegance having no peer...exquisitely written!

[This message has been edited by JLR (edited 05-14-2001).]

SEA
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with you


2 posted 05-14-2001 06:36 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

*sigh* Jamie, this is beautiful!   SEA
Dark Angel
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3 posted 05-14-2001 07:21 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ahhh my friend, you write so beautifully.  

Maree
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4 posted 05-14-2001 08:51 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

a very sweet write..loved your  blue butterfly *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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5 posted 05-14-2001 11:41 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sigh.

I miss you too.

This still makes me smile though...somehow...I have images of your garden. And you know that a year in the grand scheme isn't that long right?

Thank you dear, this means the world and I will see you again - relatively soon. The key word being relatively!

With love, your BB






All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath


[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-14-2001).]

Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 05-14-2001 11:46 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Beauty shared is beauty doubled.  Joyce
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7 posted 05-14-2001 11:58 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

AW...this is wonderful.    
Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 05-15-2001 05:45 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Jamie, my friend, this is extremely wonderful...

Regards,
Sudhir
Jamie
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9 posted 05-16-2001 05:43 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

JLR-- Thank you very much...

SEA-- Thank you my 12-stepping friend...

MM--  I am glad you think so dear one.  

Wynter-- Glad you enjoyed it--thanks

Joyce--Many thanks (squared)

Sharon-- ~blushing~  gee whiz-- thanks in so many ways you may never know...  

Sudhir-- Always brings a smile to see your name in my threads friend.. your kind aura always comes through...

K --
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most relatives are a pain...heh

HK>LK

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Severn
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10 posted 05-16-2001 06:04 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

There are relatives and there are relatives..the latter of which I wish would HURRY UP lol...

THIS is beautiful...BIG SMILES...(and hey - think about wings...)

thanks for the picture dear.

K


All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-16-2001).]

JamesMichael
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11 posted 05-16-2001 06:31 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"I miss your soft touch
my blue butterfly."
Enjoyed the feelings expressed within this writing...James
Jamie
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12 posted 05-19-2001 08:35 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Thanks James!!

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever


13 posted 05-19-2001 11:50 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

i liked this poem, james
Jamie
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14 posted 05-20-2001 05:26 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

thanks eagle,, and errr-- is your name also James?
Severn
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15 posted 06-06-2001 06:39 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

ROTF.

Had to come back for another read and I know what to call you to get you irked now don't I.

Heh.

MR J Patterson (needs an Esquire I think)
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Dark Angel
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17 posted 06-01-2004 06:26 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

How time flies...or does it?


always beautiful writing from you Jamsey dear

MM

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

 
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