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Open Poetry #13

Ring

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-05-14 05:06 AM

Now to put my resistance
on all opposed to my existence,
when hiding only brings their withdrawal;

Distance to avoid a row
memories insistence of a face that shone,
biding a ring with an impassioned silent call.
A pure metallic kiss,
wanting greater than an imagined reminisce.
Without any assistance
a rock of solitude becomes the stance,
Knowing seasons warmth falls.

How to place a wedding band,
on a Celtic Princess
with white cheeks oh so grand.
Time to learn the answer
while summer becomes the dancer,
along to autumn where they meet.
& uncovered fingers mean seedlings defeat.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-05-14 05:14 AM

Wow, dramatic, I had to read this a few times to get the jist of it . My small brain doesn't like such long words, whereas I do very much . I love the language you have used .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

2 posted 2001-05-15 04:01 AM

lovely craig....plant more seedlings the ground is wonderful and so well prepared

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-05-15 08:57 AM

I see many messages in this, but throughout, I see hope...

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