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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2001-05-14 12:13 PM


Go to sleep, baby
I will be there in your dreams
To hold you through the dark hours
Safe in loves warm bed.

Go to sleep, baby
The miles between us disappear
When you close your eyes
And draw me near.

Go to sleep, baby
Let me come on a whispered prayer
To share your nights dreaming
In feathered softness.

Go to sleep, baby
While the nights still new
And we have hours to be together
'Til the sun rises.

Then carry my dream
Throughout the suns shining
Until theres no need
To go to sleep, baby.

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2001-05-14 12:36 PM


Paula, this is beautiful! Truly it is!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-14 12:36 PM


You penned well - make sure to get the teddy bear.
angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
3 posted 2001-05-14 05:25 AM


Grovy poem, I know that feeling, when you care for someone so much that everything else becomes imaterial .
I thought it was very sweet . One of those poems you could just role up in bed with and let sleep not matter !!!
Thanks .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-05-14 09:05 AM


Paula you're showing a lot of caring here...James
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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right next door
5 posted 2001-05-16 07:50 AM


I love this Paula. Shows a lot of love hidden away in you.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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6 posted 2001-05-16 09:57 AM


Very delicate longing written here, Paula...though I'm afraid you wouldn't want to be in MY dreams!   seems like your muse has found you again, just lovely, dearheart!
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
7 posted 2001-05-16 10:07 AM


really cool write Paula
Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
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Seattle, WA, USA
8 posted 2001-05-16 04:25 PM


Caring and passion all rolled up into a very fine write. Excellent.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
9 posted 2001-05-16 06:23 PM


Wow, what great love speaks from these words.

Titia

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