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TheBlindMan
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 20
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 2001-05-13 01:45 AM



unexpected love
didn't know what to do
in all my confusion
I wound up losing you

unexpected love
didn't know what I found
instead of treading water
I just thrashed around

unexpected love
I couldn't recognize
the look of love within you
I should have seen it in your EYZE

unexpected love
in time I wore it out
now all I have is memories
and lots and lots of doubt

unexpected love
I was not looking for
now all I yearn and cry for
is that I  find some more


© Copyright 2001 Jim D - All Rights Reserved
White Wolf
Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland
1 posted 2001-05-13 03:50 AM


Oh honored blind one, I really liked this piece.  I know the feeling exactly.  Great piece.


The White Wolf

latin passion
Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-13 02:22 PM


Talk about a heart stopper - wow! Who can not resist such a poet. Was Eyze on purpose? I'll put this one in my private library.LP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

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