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a whisper's wind
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a whisper's wind |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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He likes the way I start to laugh before I even start to tell and without thought of "funny/NOT"-- he said he has to smile as well. He likes my voice, my words of choice he said my hands lead band's express. He likes my eyes-- he says, "they're kind..." He said, "You have a grand presence." He likes the way I won't back down-- the way my eyes can turn to gray. He likes to watch me stroke my thigh, so casually as my thoughts play. He says he does anticipate he watches as I contemplate-- as cat-to-mouse, a funny game, He listens--says he cannot wait. He holds his breath so he can hear- and says he loves me being near... He's said so many lovely things. He said I write the notes he sings. He called my words a whisper's wind-- called me Satan--temptor's grin and then he called me mere device, enchantment of a soul's demise. In fury, then, he slammed a fist and said he'd not burn for a kiss-- that I was just another whore... but never would he want for more. And then he said I'd burn in hell. He kissed me, "bye!" and wished me well... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Power to you girl--- I will not cast a stone at you. It was hard for you to speak as you did. But I will not cast a stone at him either. I've observed and watch then be able to make a sound decision. I will but turn the other cheek. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tis WAAAY too much me could say.. but me thinks tis better saved for another day... *sigh* .... tis never easy being a moth ... tis not easy being the flame ... and what some cant see is ... sometimes...most times ... they are one in the same.  meDid you make it to the Milky Way, |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
and wished you well? to join him in hell? you run in to the strangest people, k/s  Krawdad |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, my goodness. I don't know what to say. You tell quite a tale. Joyce |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
latin passion? um....HUH? JM...back down my bodyguard buddy...it's actually quite funny to me now!  e...not only did he wish me well, but he's going to pray for me too! lol Joyce...yes, I know some rather unusual people.... Thanks all...this was one I wrote just to vent! (Peace to Brother Tim!) serenity exits....chuckling... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I've been turning the other cheek all my life, what do you do when you run out of cheeks...  don't answer that! This is amazing writing.Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and vent you did. . . certainly not what I expected serenity . . . and that's a good thing. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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