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Just A Woman
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0 posted 2001-05-12 07:31 PM


It's pretty much a given
that the carrots carefully planted
within this small garden
will flourish
Cared for tenderly
by mother nature and I
No unexpected surprises
or refusals
I like that
If only you were
so simple




"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

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JLR
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1 posted 2001-05-12 07:52 PM


Carrots are great like that...some of my best friends are vegetables.  
Just A Woman
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2 posted 2001-05-12 07:55 PM


Grinning at JLR!  Well......I can now see the advantage of it.  LOL  
walker
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3 posted 2001-05-12 08:07 PM


Love this one!
Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-05-12 09:05 PM


Loved this Kel!

~Tier


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Sven
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5 posted 2001-05-12 09:18 PM


I've been told that I'm a lot like a carrot. . . crunchy and orange. . . LOL. . .  

simply put, this is simply sublime. . .  

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Packratmike
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6 posted 2001-05-13 03:17 AM


This is great!!! Loved it.*S*

Mike

Passions Voice
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7 posted 2001-05-14 06:49 PM


I wonder just what kind of seeds you use.  

Great poem.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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