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The Next New Dawn

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Saunni
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0 posted 05-12-2001 03:26 PM       View Profile for Saunni   Email Saunni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Saunni

The Next New Dawn

It's just like the seasons to bring changes that we slowly prepare for
And, through each one we surely find our way
In our hearts we can hold many and still have room
As every new dawn should be an even brighter day...

I hope the next new dawn you'll clearly open your eyes
And, may you easily find strength in that sun
Take the peace that the rays gently lay upon you
And, simply give praise to what the night has just done...

Allow the sunrise to give you what I surely cannot
And, take in the light that shines for us all
Because a little bit of hope lives within each soul
And, may that sun be my hands if you should ever fall...

I hope the next new dawn sings the sweet melody of love
And, the rhythm becomes the same as your heart
For when the sunset has left you down on your knees
May the dawn bridge the distance that keep you and loved ones apart...

I pray the next new dawn finds you on top of the world
And, may it's light lend you happiness on high
It's not within my power to ever stop the rain
But, may that sun be my heart to dry your eyes...

I hope the next new dawn wakes you to always be your best
And, I sure hope that dawn has allowed you a long nights rest
For I simply cannot mend any broken promises ever made
But, if you should ever need me I'm only a day away...

Saun


Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

© Copyright 2001 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-12-2001 03:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

a warm wish to one gone. . . *sigh*. . . it's hard isn't it Saun??

really well done. . . filled with wonderful thoughts and feelings. . . no anger. . . because it's all we can do. . .



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latin passion
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2 posted 05-12-2001 04:05 PM       View Profile for latin passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latin passion

totally speechless... In accord with Sven-
adding Hope to it. I'd love to keep your poem in my library. LP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 05-12-2001 04:07 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

agreeing with everything said above.....well done Saunni.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Saunni
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4 posted 05-12-2001 06:36 PM       View Profile for Saunni   Email Saunni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saunni

Thank you all for responding. I put a lot of my heart in this one.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

JLR
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5 posted 05-12-2001 06:45 PM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

Because a little bit of hopes lies within each soul

There are days when the hope gets us by...there are days when it only makes us cry.  Very nice poem, your heart is true.
walker
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6 posted 05-12-2001 06:59 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

Thanks for reminding me , I needed to read this. Great poem!
Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 05-12-2001 11:22 PM       View Profile for Mabel A. Dilley   Email Mabel A. Dilley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mabel A. Dilley

What a wonderfully insightful poem. Thanks for the present.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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8 posted 05-13-2001 01:03 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Saunni~

'simply give praise to what the night has just done...'

I can sense the significant feelings you wrapped up in this one~
Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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Watersign6
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9 posted 06-05-2001 07:51 AM       View Profile for Watersign6   Email Watersign6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watersign6's Home Page   View IP for Watersign6

you put alot of heart and soul and feelings
into all of your poems thats why i love them so  
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this is precious...very precious
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