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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-05-12 03:03 PM


Mother's Love

Mother’s love cannot be measured
Only felt in warmth and depth
This is one’s most valued treasure
Hallowed love from birth to death
Evermore the adoration
Radiating from her heart
Sooths us in our tribulations

Leaves the peace that it imparts
Only mother’s love survives
Very beauteously it thrives
Every moment of our lives

Elizabeth Santos

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latin passion
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1 posted 2001-05-12 03:27 PM


Wonderful tribute to Mother's Day.

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-05-12 05:32 PM


Excellent acrostic Elizabeth! You've captured the essence of a Mother's love beautifully, and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme very much. Always lovely to read you my friend!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-05-12 05:38 PM


First rate work.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-05-12 05:45 PM


This puts all Hallmark cards to shame, to be sure....

I hope many ask your permission, and send this on, to those that are so deserving.  This is marvelous...

as are you...

Elizabeth
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5 posted 2001-05-12 05:49 PM


Happy Mother's Day, Liz...

And a wonderful poem.  

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