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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-12 02:15 PM



Do I have to see it,
or can I just feel it.
Being a fool for love.
Being blind to the facts.
Being illogical many times.
Do I have to see it,
Or can I just feel it?
What proof do I need,
to your unfaithful deeds?


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Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 2001-05-12 03:38 PM


Feelings are usually enough
But visual proof is great, too!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

darabeth
Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33

2 posted 2001-05-12 04:42 PM


Very good poem.Thought envoking also.Good work,keep it up!
                    Dara Beth

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