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Michael G
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0 posted 2001-05-12 12:06 PM


I danced the shadows that filter
through the clouds of wisdom
content to sing my own song.

I danced the stars that passed away
from heavens own fortress
I heard their sounds.

Of lazy parades made mockery
to whom we shall wish
yet warrent none to do.

To follow outside our fears
made all the more direct
of what we may learn.

And silent shadows fall again
carress me quick my heart
to raise my eyes.

As I dance the life of me
do you wish to join
so we may see the light.

© Copyright 2001 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-12 12:18 PM


;I hope she sees thelight with you.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-05-12 01:39 PM


indeed lovely....


Greeneyes~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2001-05-12 04:05 PM


This is astonishing writing!!  Lovely!  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
4 posted 2001-05-13 12:54 PM


So does this pick up line really work??    


A wonderful picture as always  and who could possibily say no?    

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
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5 posted 2001-05-13 01:14 PM


So beautifully penned, Michael G; such words you painted... expertly. Who can say - no? LP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
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Kelowna, BC, Canada
6 posted 2001-05-16 10:37 AM


Her world must be dim without you........

Beautiful Post.........As Always..

Jenn E

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