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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-05-12 08:32 AM




One heart

When love coming near
Flowing without words
Soft touch of magic
Romantic appear

Mirror of love
Sharing one heart
Effusion tenderness
Feelings coming above

On heart, one soul
How love enlighten
My whole


Charisma
~*TMP*~
12/05/01



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-12-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-12 08:37 AM


The gracefulness of the swans are enhanced by your words....
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2 posted 2001-05-12 10:01 AM


Your words wove together as do the swans in love. LP

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

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3 posted 2001-05-12 11:14 AM


The picture of swans with words to unite the love.
MAGNIFICENT

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4 posted 2001-05-12 12:39 PM


Simply lovely!!! I really enjoyed this one.  
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5 posted 2001-05-12 12:55 PM


Charisma~
So delicately lovely is your presentation.
I certainly enjoy seeing you here !
~*Marge*~


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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-12-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-05-12 03:22 PM


Simply breathtaking work.  The picture is prefect!!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-05-12 03:35 PM


A wonderful presentation of beauty held in these words.  Beautiful..

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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8 posted 2001-05-12 05:04 PM


Lovely Charisma...soft and delicate...James
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9 posted 2001-05-12 06:50 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I am really glad that you enjoy both, the image and my poem.
May God bless you all.

Charisma

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