Open Poetry #13 |
Designing Thoughts |
Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Designing Thoughts My Dearest, Thoughts of thy breath warm my body this night, from the chill of loneliness. Flesh remembering thy touch felled upon me, by the gentlest of hands. I have awakened to thine call, beckoning. Conscious, am I, to shadows cast in darkness, highlighted by the moon's glow, my vision drawn to the length of you. I am resting, head in hand, pounding thoughts subsiding, finally. Words outpouring my needs, traveling the night's distance to be one with thee. This night seemingly long, as I envision the moments last, of togetherness, a time of quiet, silence speaking to me in the hold of arms, worth more than my need of words, I wish thee to know. I shall descend, once again, into the deep closing off the present, awaiting the next, beneath it all, dwelling in memories, in affections hold, sailing the night in drift with you, taking me to dreams yet to unfold... Lovingly Yours, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
"In drift with you" I like that, I like that last stanza especially. Nicely done. "The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Lady O... "Dreams yet to unfold".. indeed... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lady, it is good to see you, and your letters, return. It's been too long.... |
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Taffetta Junior Member
since 2001-02-26
Posts 27 |
Lady O I really like this verse: I shall descend, once again, into the deep closing off the present, awaiting the next, beneath it all, dwelling in memories, in affections hold, sailing the night in drift with you, taking me to dreams yet to unfold... O dream away............ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must agree with Lady Sunshine, it has been far too long my Lady. . . A thousand thanks for this. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
with voice of golden nightingale, she sings of love's regale, passion's song upon night's wind, of love, t'will never end. nice to read you again fair lady. I know not of whom you seek, but am pleased to be able to once again listen in to your song to your wayward knight. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Sweet dreams..to you and your knight(sigh) what a way to go! |
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