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0 posted 2001-05-11 10:42 PM


Save Me
By: Noah Eaton
5/11/01

Sometimes I can’t move
Sometimes I can’t breathe
There is no one there
To clear my grief with me

I beg to differ, but I’m differed to beg
Scarecrow thoughts barren to release
Countless crows peck at my fragile soul
That can’t be all there is to me

In this silence I can’t breathe
I’m crawling on my knees
I am crying, in my memories
Waiting for all this suffering to ease…

Save me
Save me
Save me
I’m bleeding
It’s hard to breathe
I don’t believe
That no one will ever love me

I’m a shattered boy
I’m a broken toy
Without a smile in memory
Such little I could avoid

I am freezing
Trying to find reasoning
Converting my grief
Desiring to live in peace

Save me
Save me
Save me
I’m bleeding
It’s hard to breathe
I don’t believe
That no one will ever love me

In this silence I can’t breathe
I’m crawling on my knees
I am crying, in my memories
Waiting for all this suffering to ease…

Save me
Save me
Save me
I’m bleeding
It’s hard to breathe
I don’t believe
That no one will ever love me
I can’t believe that nobody will ever love me
Save me…
Save me…


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1 posted 2001-05-11 10:54 PM


WOW!!!...very insightful poem. I'm left speechless.
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