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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-05-11 07:16 PM



What I'd Love to Do...with You

Remembering that day at Bay
a poet's write for two.
Meeting at the rails on edge
tall, and suave in blue.

To take that walk along our way
Museum arts in sight.
I'd walk those halls with you in arm
each priceless, in delight.

Would love to dance, for just your eyes
and sway my body so.
Closer, moving slow, intense
and watch your eyes in tow.

To picnic and lay out on quilt
in open air, with you.
To sip and taste desires, pure
these moment's wants, a few.

So many things I'd love to share,
But settle I for one,
To remain in thoughts of yours for now
from morn 'til each day's done.


A  ~ Wynters wish...


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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1 posted 2001-05-11 07:26 PM


"Would love to dance, for just your eyes
and sway my body so.
Closer, moving slow, intense
and watch your eyes in tow.


I'm sure after he reads this you will be in his thoughts for a long time.
Now please make sure his heart is strong if you ever get to satisfy this wish.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-11 07:36 PM


haaaaa    made me laugh...definitely has a strong heart...and I have no idea  why I haven't danced for him yet...maybe soon..

thank you *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS
3 posted 2001-05-11 08:22 PM


'To picnic and lay out on quilt
in open air, with you.
To sip and taste desires, pure
these moment's wants, a few.

So many things I'd love to share,
But settle I for one,
To remain in thoughts of yours for now
from morn 'til each day's done.'

Whew...very nicely done, wynter...I love the entire thing, but the picnic got me, for sure!  Excellent write, m'friend!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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right next door
4 posted 2001-05-11 10:52 PM


beautiful work of art. If I were the one that you wrote this for you would forever be in my thoughts
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-05-12 04:54 AM


snow..I love picnics...thank you

~Wynter


Alan,
forever in your thoughts lovely phrase I  may use  as  an inspirational title
thank you  ((hugss))
Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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6 posted 2001-05-12 03:43 PM


awesome.... love the title!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

7 posted 2001-05-12 03:56 PM


What a piece!! A masterpiece. Have a great time on your picnic. LP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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8 posted 2001-05-12 03:59 PM


capitvating!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
9 posted 2001-05-12 04:00 PM


This is so cool! I really loved this one.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2001-05-12 05:01 PM


Lots of desire here Wynter...James
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