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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-05-11 04:51 PM


Frightened you, have I?
painting exotic
coa-coa colors
spread upon naked
landscapes
unnerving, isn't it?
being carried around
bends & curves
through dark forrests
over mountainous regions
to smooth java column
roads, parched
yearning for thirst's
quenching

Rest
beneath silken
shade, sip peachy
mango palate
contemplating self
reflected in twin pools
shimmering
with hypnotic stars
hopelessly lost
in java dreams,
but you no longer
care...

~Tier{R.T.}

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-11-2001).]

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-11 05:04 PM


such an eastern, mystic feeling....wrapped up well in your thoughts....
Tessa
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 67
Ohio
2 posted 2001-05-11 05:17 PM


This is outstanding.  The voice through this is captivating.  Well done!
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
3 posted 2001-05-11 05:35 PM


Thank you, Decaflame & Tessa for such wonderful comments. Nicely said!

*smiles*

~Tier



[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-11-2001).]

Sven
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4 posted 2001-05-14 07:26 PM


I love this one Tier. . . very flavorful. . .  

well done. . .

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