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Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

0 posted 2001-05-11 02:59 PM

Her eyes lit to
dance in pleasure
as laughter bubbled up and
spilled in a rush
across the room
in mirthful joy
followed by the sudden stained blush of
realization
She flashed a guilty grin and
fell back to her work

And he, smiled
pleased
moving along into his day
carrying with him that one moment
unarmed

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-11 03:30 PM

Such a charming snippet of "unaware"...

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-05-11 09:15 PM

Very cute! I absolutely love it...and know what you mean, too!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-05-11 10:09 PM

Ah....love! Cool poem.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-05-12 12:23 PM

One moment like that can carry me through a whole day...sometimes a week! Ha!

samantha4
Junior Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 32
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2001-05-12 01:02 AM

Tessa - I loved this poem...the way you gave such life to your words...my favorite line -
"as laughter bubbled up and
spilled in a rush
across the room".....absolutely great!

i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-05-12 06:50 AM

this was a terrific poem...captured "a moment" perfectly .
*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-05-12 06:51 AM

whoops forgot to shelve this one for future read..

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-05-12 07:24 AM

I wrote about this subject too in one of my Dutch poems. Such a moment just gives you a kick.

Titia

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