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Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2001-05-11 10:31 AM



A Repast of Blessings
Virginia Salter

the hour is but seven o’clock
yet the sun seems at ten
it’s hard to understand the look of day
when early morn’s still at hand

the town is quiet in this early hour
as a golden day begins
the poet at her word machine
telling tales provoking grins

cat sits on the porch stoop
longingly seeking drink
yet water bowl sits within
garden sprinkler’s circle of rain

a reflection of sunlight
provides stage lights
for droplets dancing upon the patio
while ferns quiver as gentle fans

serenity so envelops these moments
as if a repast of blessings
has been received from within
God’s universal cathedral

© May 8,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-05-11 10:08 PM


What a nice way to spend a morning..I enjoyed this.  
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2 posted 2001-05-11 10:15 PM


Ahhh... those few but precious quiet moments to really look around at the simpliest of pleasures. Loved it.
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3 posted 2001-05-12 01:29 AM


Thank you both so much for reading and commenting.  I really thought this one was going to just sink into the sunset.
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