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The Night the Moon Crossed Over
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The Night the Moon Crossed Over |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Night the Moon Crossed Over Traveling the night skies, with eyes you brushed my dark, unsealed images, those in shades of blue. Beam-touched, you crossed over held my every breath, closed in, gathered my passions, to be consumed. Unique are you, shadowing my thoughts, wearing your scent, flooding my mind, lingering there, in midair. I can thrive on your lips touches flee to my knight's dreams, release desires, bind my world unto yours. As you reign upon my patterned days, I myst within these dark retreats, soul feeling captive to your wishes. In silent harmony, I cross the times past embrace each moment shared, delight in the sparkle from your deep. And on this night, I watched the moon, in all its eloquence, cross over and bestow upon me, a lasting glow of hope. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I was going to choose a favorite stanza, I started with the 2nd from the last, then wanted to add the last, then read the 3rd from the last again and it would need to be included, too. So I stopped figuring I'd just be reposting your entire piece here. Guess what! I really like this poem! That title pulls the reader in. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you, Virginia, I have held the title for a few days...the moon that night on my ride home would keep crossing over the highway to be in the view of my eyes...so I came home and wrote the title...waiting for the rest to follow. ~Softsmiles Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Moving in the dark, midnight blue, Eyes watching the sentinel moon, As we all move from going to. Wavering yet steady in points of light, Amidst thoughts arriving too soon, Events echo in dreams of the night Gloom |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lots of great poetic phrasing in this one, Maureen, "knight's dream" way to go! Kathleen Blake |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I was once told that sometimes the title says it all.... it did, but then you enhanced it just the same! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Wynter....James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ And you had to know I would like this one ! Understanding perfectly that the title captured your impressions~ and your pen etched the embodiment of your thoughts. Wonderfully done, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Isn't it amazing how sometimes the words come but no titles, and other times the titles come before the words. This worked well Maureen. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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