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Open Poetry #13

Alone in this room

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-10 10:26 PM

Picture me here,
alone in this room.
Thinking of you.
Tears in my eyes.
Hope on my mind.
Tasting your kisses.
Projecting my sorrows,
straight to your heart.
I only know,
what this feels like,
to have love you so much,
and to let you go.
And in my solitude,
I can still feel your touch.
In the cold of the night,
I can still breathe your warmth.
I remain still,
feeling your presence next to me.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-10-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-10 10:50 PM

Walker~
'And in my solitude,
I can still feel your touch.'

And you've touched your tenderness here.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-05-11 05:48 AM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-11 09:49 AM

I know these feelings well, Walker, you've written them beautifully...

~Tier

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-11 09:54 AM

Sad and well done! Agree with Marge and Tiersdin fully.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

5 posted 2001-05-11 12:42 PM

If I can add my thread as well - I enjoyed the reading.LP

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

6 posted 2001-05-11 11:58 PM

walker---This is too sad. I don't know what else to say.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-05-12 05:15 AM

breathing the warmth of someone...hmmm wonderful thoughts walker..wonderful poem of love

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-05-12 06:02 AM

You keep writing Walker, we're here to support you in your sad moments, as good friends will.

Let it out, it eases your mind a bit.

Love, Titia

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