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Upon The Dawn

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Greeneyes
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0 posted 05-10-2001 10:07 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

Lost in you
I stand screaming
Your voice in my head
Softly calling,

In you lost
I lay weeping
I feel silence
Deep inside me
My soul echoes
My heart feels pain
Where traces of you remain,
The rain falling, my tears

In shades of midnight
I write to you by candlelight as you
Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear
Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there
I feel your warmth, your breathing still
Guides me to the haven of my
Dreams among the stars

I love you for the passion I feel when
I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your
Beauty, for the colors I use to
Paint our canvas of time gathered
In vibrant colors
      Walking in summertime,  
Gently falling snows of winter
Autumn leaves blowing

Time is all I have

Upon the dawn, your calming
Peace renews my heart,
Where again we
dance in salvation


Time
stands still




***




Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-12-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-10-2001 10:10 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Oh Lauren.....I have not words to express the beauty of this to me on this day....thank you dear lady.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

latin passion
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2 posted 05-10-2001 10:13 PM       View Profile for latin passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latin passion

One could not help but to close her eyes and see the colors you painted.  So vivid - I loved it.
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3 posted 05-10-2001 11:07 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Lost in you
I lay crying
I feel the silence
Deep inside me
My soul echoes
My heart feels the pain
Where traces of you remain,
The rain falling, my tears

In shades of midnight
I write to you by candlelight
as you
Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear
Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there
I feel your warmth, your breathing still
Guides me to the haven of my
Dreams among the stars


I love you for the passion I feel when
I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your
Beauty, for the colors I use to
Paint our canvas of time gathered

In vibrant colors
      Walking in summertime,  
Gently falling snows of winter
Autumn leaves blowing

Time is all I have

Upon the dawn, your calming
Peace renews my heart,
Where again we
dance in salvation

Time
stands still
===========================


oh L, you already know I felt every exquisite word of this,
and I know where this level of inspire comes from ...
and the need to feel and then write it...
God this is beautiful, I just wish we didnt have to live it to write it so intensly...
and the rest...you already know *S*
love ya for this one sweet poetess of the stars
and now I will give these words back..
as you know how much they mean to me...
but they belong here with this poem     



Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
I have loved the stars too fondly
To be fearful of the night".

(author unknown)



~~~~~~~


"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold." ...
"So dawn goes down to day,
Nothing gold can stay."
~Frost~


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-10-2001).]

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4 posted 05-11-2001 12:17 AM       View Profile for samantha4   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samantha4

lovely...thank you for sharing it

i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings

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5 posted 05-11-2001 04:51 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This was simply beautiful - oh, and Janet Marie, your comment was awesome too - lol!
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6 posted 05-11-2001 01:13 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

then may the dawn come
and with it,
the promise of forever. . .

beautiful Lauren. . . just beautiful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 05-11-2001 06:03 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Lauren,

You describe love so beautifully, my friend. I enjoyed this much.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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8 posted 05-11-2001 09:30 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Thank you to all that responded...I am grateful and appreciate you all very much...





Greeneyes~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Janet Marie
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9 posted 09-24-2001 11:11 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Needed to read this one tonite....
miss you sweet emerald poetess

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

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State of Suspended Passion


10 posted 12-11-2001 07:41 AM       View Profile for Siofra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Siofra

Wherever you are, this is beautiful!   I adore it!  

I am many.

Janet Marie
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11 posted 07-13-2002 08:43 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I love you for the passion I feel when
I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your
Beauty, for the colors I use to
Paint our canvas of time gathered
In vibrant colors
      Walking in summertime,  
Gently falling snows of winter
Autumn leaves blowing

Time is all I have
============================


praying for time...because theres so many who love you and need you...so many beautiful words still to write.
love you my sister of butterfly memories.
jm

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12 posted 02-23-2003 10:14 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

a real gem this poem is PoetFriendGreeneyes...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*
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13 posted 04-10-2003 10:56 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoyed
Janet Marie
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awesome!
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