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AJ Keating
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since 2001-05-10
Posts 26
New Hampshire

0 posted 2001-05-10 06:00 PM


XXXIV
Adam Kernander

On your left shoulder there sits a dragon,
And to your right, the daughter of said beast.
In unison they rear their heads to feast
On ev'ry word of life's beautiful songs.
Should the attempt be made to battle long
These vicious monsters turn all the more fierce,
And with bolts of fire through your skull will pierce,
To burn in you submission of the wrong.
The pain you must feel is unimagined,
Yet I, too am disheartened by your woes
When each word, like a scared ladybug goes
From my lips, t'ward your ear, but with the wind.
Would I the mode to steal your dragon beasts,
I'd place them by my own side without haste.


© Copyright 2001 Adam Kernander - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-10 06:27 PM


I'm impressed, you obviously put a lot of work into this and it shows.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-05-10 06:39 PM


Adam! I had no idea that you were already a member here. Excellent write...

*smiles*
~Tier{R.T.}

Just A Woman
Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

3 posted 2001-05-10 08:46 PM


Good to see you, Adam!   Have missed you!  

(Kellie)  


"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-05-11 10:15 PM


Welcome to the family!!!! Please check your email.  
ATelamon
Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
5 posted 2001-05-12 03:11 AM


I see the Sonnet numbers just keep growing. Good for you.

And hello again

ATelamon here

Le Capitain Regarde in a past life.

Nice to see you.

"The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally."

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-05-12 08:42 AM


A very warm Welcome to Passions!
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