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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-05-10 05:55 PM

I’m the salt-water fish
In your fresh water eyes
You compose me a wish
That our love’s a disguise

Drops from the ocean
Run from your stream
One single motion
And you wash me clean

Trailing whipping fish
Beached upon the shore
You’re my pretty trout
I’m the sea you adore

You're the fresh and the clean
I’m the torrential spray
You’re the naiveté
I’m about to give way

You thought that you'd change me
I'm you yet unclean
I stare into your eyes
And you see what I mean

I can drink from your depths
And filled from your eyes
But I can’t nourish you
So I'll make you despise

Treated and poured
In the heat from above
Wash away the salty taste
Of our incomplete love

You won't drown in the sea
Let the earth be your death
For when you long for me
You'll gasp for every breath

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-10-2001).]

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-05-10 06:14 PM

Got me 'hook line and sinker'.... good one.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-10 06:33 PM

this read like a song!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

3 posted 2001-05-10 07:37 PM

So beautiful. The love is felt.
LITL,
†Heather†

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

4 posted 2001-05-11 12:04 PM

awe man? you werent playin with this joker! geyah, this sukas bad!! theres no doubt about this one. its cool that yer confident of being this "salt-water fish." awe man, there's so much depth here it makes me think. imgonna read this all night!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-05-11 01:51 PM

Like oil and water huh? Some things just dont mix...and no matter how you try they never will...great write you

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2001-05-11 07:13 PM

Wow, Walt. Like, wow!

Corinne

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

7 posted 2001-05-14 12:17 PM

Deadly Walter.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2001-05-14 08:27 PM

This is fantastic Walty!

enjoyed it very very much

Maree

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