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White Wolf
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0 posted 2001-05-10 04:49 AM


You tell me you only want to dance
Nothing more nothing less
But what does this mean
So we just dance

As time goes on
You dance closer to me
We come to that point
When the dance becomes more

Do we continue this dance
You told me you only wanted to dance
Nothing more nothing less
But we still dance

We have become
More than just a dance
Should I stop this dance
Or should I continue

You told me never again
Yet its happening again
Just like before
And still we dance

Am I doing the right thing
By continuing this dance
Or am I just getting what I want
Nothing more nothing less


This may be confusing but that is exactly what these feelings are.  She said never again but I see that we are headed that way.  Maybe that is what she wants, maybe not.  In the past she has told me to just let things happen.  Does that apply to now?  What confusion but I do know one thing.  I am who I am and will always be me.  Thanx for your time.


The White Wolf


If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

[This message has been edited by White Wolf (edited 05-12-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-10 08:01 AM


feelings are confusing sometimes, especially when your not sure about each other, but its always good to be yourself, nothing more nothing less.
excellent penned

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2 posted 2001-05-10 05:00 PM


Thank you.  It has been a long time since I have been able to write anything.  I will be writing more ofter now that I have been released from a great many thing.  It isn't really true confusion.  I know what I must do and I hope that the road I travel doesn't hurt anyone anymore.  Thans again.


The White Wolf

If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

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3 posted 2001-05-10 06:29 PM


oh, sometimes we write out our confusion in our poetry and it comes out and then we are clearer in our feelings, I don't know if that makes sense or not but I think I feel what you are saying here.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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4 posted 2001-05-10 07:06 PM


Never loose yourself in a dance
nothing more nothing less
because than you will stumble
maybe it's time to change the music

Good luck
Titia


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5 posted 2001-05-10 08:48 PM


I find that when I write my confused feelings in words things seem more clear and I am able to look at it from a differant angle.
God Bless,
LITL,
†Heather†

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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6 posted 2001-05-10 08:59 PM


welcome back my friend. . . keep writing, it's the only way out. . . you'll find what you're looking for. . .

well done. . .

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White Wolf
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7 posted 2001-05-11 05:37 AM


Poetry has always been a release and a way to look at things from a different angle for me.  That is why I am happy that I can indeed write again.  There for a while I feared I would never do it again.  I am glad to be back and am a bit surprised to find that I was missed.  Thank you all.


The White Wolf

If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

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8 posted 2001-05-11 09:17 AM


In the confusion of the dance, words will draw a straight line....

fully understood.

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If you are happy in this dance, then just let it be.....if not, well......just stay true to you.   I hope the best for you    SEA
White Wolf
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10 posted 2001-05-11 02:02 PM


I am very happy with this dance.  I actually had already desided to continue this dance before I wrote this.  I wrote it to gain even more release and a better understanding of these feelings.  If it isn't obvious, but it looks as if it is, this is about a friendship, my best friend, that went beyond a friendship at one time.  We are still best friends but she says that she only wants to be friends and yet she/we keep getting closer and closer and thus my confusion at the time.  She once said just let things happen and so I will just let this friendship go where it may.
The White Wolf

If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

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here's hoping it goes towards love....I'm a sucker for this kind of love working out!    SEA
White Wolf
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12 posted 2001-05-12 04:16 AM


As am I, SEA.  As am I.  

If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

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