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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-05-10 12:18 PM



Lou Reed, they said you died
I can’t believe someone would chide
I would like to have that someone’s hide
For you see, today, I sadly cried

I saw the headline at good ole PIPs
On my laptop eating at Big Boy Kips
The link sausage perched on my lips
I couldn’t finish my bacon strips

Lou Reed, you is my poet muse
Would I be yours if you could choose
If two muses could only fuse
Would they fit in each other’s shoes

Lou Reed you are my Bob Dylan
I wish we could read poetry chillin
I’ll take a walk if you are willin'
On the wild side you get top billin

I roll the velvet carpet underground
Red but not for Hades bound
You developed such a unique sound
Words I hope that are profound

Goodnight Lou Reed who didn’t die
Accused of death from getting high
Thank the goodness it was a lie
I roll over prone and dry my eye

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2001-05-10 12:21 PM


Hey Walty, I am not familiar with Lou Reed, but I thought this was terrific!

I enjoyed it m'friend  

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-10-2001).]

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2001-05-10 12:24 PM


Cute!!! Very cute..thank you for not telling everyone my strange pun regarding this.    
wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-05-10 12:26 PM


too bad yuh i gotta post a link so peeps will know who Lou is!!!

crap i stink at links so just go over to the alley and look for my post there yuh.


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-10-2001).]

forevernbluejeans
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4 posted 2001-05-10 12:27 PM


Very cute...he does have his own unique style doesnt he
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