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Open Poetry #13

I miss you too much

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

0 posted 2001-05-09 10:22 PM

I miss you too much
The lonely trip
The vision splendour
The canyon with its legs apart.The grasses waving the folliage calling.
Valleys;hips
Arched at drink ,the water bird.
The curves .The bends.
The whispering willows.
The signs
The lilies bearing all to see
dew drops rolling down her stem.
My only rest is
Eyes closed tight
And then it's night's turn to torture me.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-05-10 03:56 AM

a nice write...

regards helen,
Sudhir

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2001-05-10 06:14 AM

This is very subtle but very powerful write, I enjoyed it very much.

Regards,
Olias.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-05-10 08:56 AM

Powerful and very nice!

Nathan

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

4 posted 2001-05-10 05:53 PM

Hold on Helen, Take care, Morning brushes the curtains glory.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-10 07:02 PM

this is quite sensual, you know

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

6 posted 2001-05-20 06:47 AM

I TOO MIsssssssss you very much

I love to nice poetry.

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