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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 05-09-2001 09:38 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

            Listening

            I heard my own
                  heart
                       in the whisper
                                      of another’s dream…

            a caring
                  rising above
                       common clouds
                                      of murmuring hope

            taking up
                  with feathered wing
                       to the sun’s beams
                                     an..ti..ci..pa..tion….

            slowly, on lips parched
                  of a bona fide desire,
                       finding a stream’s
                                      release

            a surcease
                  of suffering, the
                       want,
                                      now long gone

            in one’s eyes…

                  to realize…

                       with no surprise…

                                      that

I heard my own
heart
in the whisper
of another’s dream…


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-09-2001 09:57 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I heard my own
heart
in the whisper
of another’s dream…
======================

and it resonates back...in pure poetry...
Sun this is lovely...
in both intend and presentation
well done potess of the sun  

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold." ...
"So dawn goes down to day,
Nothing gold can stay."
~Frost~

OLIAS
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2 posted 05-09-2001 10:49 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

I heard my own heart in the whisper of anothers dream, I wish I'd written this line it says so much about the inspiration of art, poetry, music, anything that inspires us to be better than we are. Wonderful poem Sunshine, and superb line... is it for sale.

Regards,
Olias.

            
Tiersdin
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3 posted 05-09-2001 10:51 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

Now this is romance... soft as a sweet sigh... Lovely, Sunshine, very...

*smiles*

~Tier
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4 posted 05-09-2001 10:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

such a delicate touch here, sun..
Sunshine
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5 posted 05-09-2001 11:04 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

JanetMarie - intent and presentation is a poem, is it not?....thank you little one...

Olias...never for sale...not when one finds a compliment as pure as yours...you may use it wherever, whenever, only give the author her due...that is all...

Tier, indeed, romance, in simple form...

'Deer, thank you Sir...a light touch is all that I can offer...to my poetry...
Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 05-10-2001 03:50 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Karilea, my friend,

This is fantastic poetry...

Always feels great to read you...

Regards,
Sudhir
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7 posted 05-10-2001 04:07 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I found that somehow very "warming", so tender Karilea, but then I remembered who wrote it!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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Marge Tindal
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8 posted 05-10-2001 07:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Karilea~
Just lovely ...
You know, of course, that I'd find it softly rendered.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 05-11-2001 11:56 AM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

Oh - most strange - to read thoughts expressing thoughts like deja vu - recalling the lyric - "Where or When"  - this is very beautiful - and for me - most appropriate.  
Alan
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10 posted 05-11-2001 10:59 PM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

Sunshine I like it all I can't pick one part that jumps out at me. This is a wonderful read. Soft and sweet
latin passion
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11 posted 05-11-2001 11:03 PM       View Profile for latin passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latin passion

The art of listening - is an art indeed. I always enjoy your poetry. LP
snowpants
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12 posted 05-11-2001 11:44 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

This is such a soft and emotional write, sunshine!  Excellent work!  I love it...

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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13 posted 06-01-2001 02:39 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Dreamy.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

passing shadows
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14 posted 06-01-2004 12:22 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

never know what you'll hear if you just listen, huh? very inspiring!
 
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