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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-09 04:06 PM



The morning dew,
rested on my cheeks.
I wasn't crying, it was one of those things.
My petals were barely open.
and they wanted to wither away.
My roots had been uprooted,
weakly laying on top soil.
I was a moment away from giving up,
when you came.
You brought the rain.
Your brought the sun.
You nestle me,
secure my hopes.
I was so happy at last.
But with your love,
you also brought a cyclone.

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-05-09 06:04 PM


the good and the bad that love brings. . . do we take both, or just hold out for one?

love the questions in this one walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2001-05-09 06:06 PM


Oh, Oh.  Maybe the little flower survived. Just because she was so small. Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 05-09-2001).]

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-05-09 06:55 PM


Love is beautiful but it trys even the strongest of us. Thanks for this!
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-09 08:25 PM


Now I know why I've had such a difficult year, I am a rose!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


thecraig
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5 posted 2001-05-10 05:42 PM


A lovely pondered flirt with natures temptations!
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