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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-09 03:51 PM



  If


if love is a crime
we shall all be convicted
for they shall find the evidence
in the seams of our minds
and the cracks of our hearts

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
helen smith
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1 posted 2001-05-09 04:03 PM


awwwwwww      wish I had written that ..and you are the master criminal   !
JLR
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2 posted 2001-05-09 04:24 PM


See, that's exactly why I don't mess with it, don't write about it, never even think about it.  The love police are always lurking...can't be too careful.  Loved this but then you would already know that!
PortuguesePoet
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3 posted 2001-05-09 04:26 PM


GUILTY AS CHARGED.......

Love Arlindo

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4 posted 2001-05-09 05:59 PM


doing my time. . . life. . .

excellent helen. . .

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5 posted 2001-05-09 07:56 PM


OneSlickLady~
Lock me up ... and throw away the key !  
~*Marge*~



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Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-05-09 08:41 PM


anything but solitary, that would kill me for certain!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2001-05-09 08:47 PM


Oh, this is very good.  Joyce
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8 posted 2001-05-09 08:53 PM


A sentence I wish not to be serving at this time, but I suppose none of us have a choice. I enjoyed this. Very simply said. Very effectively said.


[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 05-09-2001).]

Dennis
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9 posted 2001-05-09 09:10 PM


I wonder how man men would go to prison for love?  
Just A Woman
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10 posted 2001-05-09 10:05 PM


Ah, very well written, 1 slick lady.  So very very true.  


"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Krawdad
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11 posted 2001-05-09 11:21 PM


oooh, you do last lines sooooo well!
And I love "quickies" like this too . . .

Krawdad
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Amature2
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12 posted 2001-05-09 11:58 PM


I would like to enter Not Guilty plea for reason of "Insanity" ......... Very nice 1slick_lady
DonFurr
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13 posted 2001-05-10 12:22 PM


And you said I was good at the short ones?
WOW!!!!!!!!

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2001-05-10 12:26 PM


and convicted we shall be  

so much said in so few words
I enjoyed very much.

Maree

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