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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-05-09 08:41 AM


Happiness pours out my cheeks
As to you I fondly speak
Blushing as the words you say
Bring joy to my day


Smile worn across my face
As at you I gaze
Tingling as back you stare
Catching me unaware


Stuttering words I squeak
As to you I try Speak
Blood flowing through my body fast
Seconds, Minutes fly right past


Heart pounding inside my chest
As with you I am at rest
Thoughts flow through my mind
As new things of you I find


Eyes swell full of  tears
As my soul it holds you near
Tears run from my eyes
I never want to say goodbye

© Copyright 2001 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-05-09 09:06 AM


Julie,

This is so well written.. so much feeling in the knowing...

regards,
sudhir

Mabel A. Dilley
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2 posted 2001-05-09 02:06 PM


Goodness! This was marvelous writing. Wiping a tear.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-09 06:12 PM


this is how it should be Julie. . . may we always know this. . .

well done. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2001-05-09 06:13 PM


It's been a long time,  but I remember.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-05-09 08:41 PM


sounds like love to me, all the signs are there...
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