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Robulus
Junior Member

since 2001-05-01

Posts 11

0 posted 2001-05-09 07:52 AM

Cruel Intensions
by Robin Spiteri.
Staring at the sunset, that crimson disc of pain
I take it in and wonder, whatever have I gained?
my spoken words recorded, my actions right or wrong,
all but fleeting moments passing, lost amongst the throngs.
Will I be remembered, recalled in later years?
Will cruel fate compel me to shed so many tears?
bitter, fearful, lonely, condemned like all the rest
nature's cruel intension beats hard within my chest.
The details of the future are shrouded in the mist
like the early morning's ocean compelled by sunshine's kiss,
It comes and goes regardless, mankind does not exist,
doomed, forever dying, we linger only like a kiss.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-05-09 04:37 PM

Interesting Robin...James

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

2 posted 2001-05-13 09:01 PM

Robulus, you have said much. I like the way you said it. Hope to read more of your work. ME

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-13 10:15 PM

Wishing you happier times ahead. Interesting reading.LP

For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2001-05-13 11:48 PM

Very poignantly told!

One little nit: typo in title, should be spelled "Intentions."

Corinne

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2001-05-14 12:40 PM

It seems you have found the words I couldn't find! Very creative!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Robulus
Junior Member

since 2001-05-01

Posts 11

6 posted 2001-05-14 03:09 AM

Whoops..an s instead of a t.(How embarassing)
Thanks for the tip.

Does anyone know how to change a post so that it links up with the rest of your stuff(I never checked that option box when I originally posted)

[This message has been edited by Robulus (edited 05-14-2001).]

Balladeer

Administrator

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-05-14 08:48 PM

I'm afraid I don't understand your question. Can you be more specific?

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

8 posted 2001-05-14 09:50 PM

I really liked this especially the last two lines :

It comes and goes regardless, mankind does not exist,
doomed, forever dying, we linger only like a kiss.

magnificent!!!

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