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insect
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0 posted 2001-05-08 02:09 AM


The years are passing like the hands on a clock
Yesterday I ran but today I just walk
My memory is fading from day to day
I wanted to tell you something but I...

© Copyright 2001 insect - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-05-08 04:16 AM


Oh.....this is so cool!!!!!!!!! Probably the best I've read in a long time with a great twist at the end!!!!  got me buzzed!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-05-08 06:50 AM


Bravo!  What a wonderful verse Insect!  Oh I enjoyed this clever wording ... you've left me filling in the blanks in a most excellent way ... much enjoyed this, thank you!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

SEA
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3 posted 2001-05-08 12:47 PM


allow me to remind you..... this is great....   SEA ( Lois   )
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-08 03:16 PM


ROFL
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-05-08 03:48 PM


I want you to know that.....

Sorry, I forgot, but I'll tell you something else. Jee...forgot it again.

Very nice poem bye the way

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-08-2001).]

dgvarner
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6 posted 2001-05-08 07:12 PM


wow!  love this!  speaks loudly in so few words...     have often felt this way in my wandering mind..sometimes it was there, on the top of my head...but it teetered off just as i opened my mouth...funny how that happens...  

hugs, g


"...if i ran away,
i'd never have the strength
to go very far..."  

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-08-2001).]

SpitFire
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7 posted 2001-05-08 07:39 PM


~Ok so,...I've read this a thousand times now! And it's stuck in my head. You're top stuff I! Enjoyed. Again. And again. *Peace poet.
snowpants
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8 posted 2001-05-08 09:27 PM


Yep...definitely got the curiosity goin' with this one... ...but, great write, insect!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Balladeer
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9 posted 2001-05-09 12:17 PM


well, they say the good thing about Alzheimer's is you get to meet a lot of new people   Look what you have to look forward to!  
insect
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10 posted 2001-05-09 02:42 PM


Sunnyone
   Kit McCallum
      SEA breeze
        Irish Rose
         Titia Geertman
           dgvarner
           SpitFire
            snowpants
            Balladeer

          THANK YOU
                  

[This message has been edited by insect (edited 05-09-2001).]

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